Ryan the hedgehog and his friends go up against an unknown foe as he tries to rescue Ryan's girl. A spoof sprite comic based on Sonic the Hedgehog, starring characters made by me and my friends.
If you don't like it, don't read it
I'v read through the entire comic. It's okay for a Sonic comic. The graphics get progressively better as the story goes along. However, there are a few grammatical errors you made in the first few pages of your comic, as well as the dreaded fourth wall breaking in Issue 18. Over all, it's alright, just watch out for errors and breaking the fourth wall.
Valid Soul
Thanks for reviewing my comic, and thanks for pointing out the errors, but quite frankly as it is my comic, I can break the forth wall if I want to